Monday, 7 October 2013

Plotline Update

In our plotline we needed an item that would link Kyle to the beating and we decided on a ring that he could possibly throw at the client in anger after the beating:

'Upon opening the box it is revealed that the parcel is the ring Kyle left behind in the beating.'

But after thinking it was clear that a homeless man with no belongings wouldn't throw, what he had left, away. So we decided that if Kyle were to wear a a necklace that the client would pull off in the struggle then he can use this to fuel his revenge. Almost like he knew all along that he would somehow hurt Kyle the way he hurt him.

So the Plotline is still the same but we have changed this small factor so that it is more understanable. We all agree that the audience will understand this better and it will make a better storyline in general.

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