Due to a lot of people on the feedback questionnaire stating that they found the narrative to be confusing we have decided to adapt a few things about the film.
The main thing that the respondents found confusing about the film was the middle section and why Kyle's character was actually going to the houses in the first place.
To make this section of the narrative seem a lot clearer, we all conferred and decided that instead of wasting time re-shooting the scene and showing the actual writing on the letter, we should have the same shot and have a voice over.
This voice over would be the Employer himself reading out what he has written on the letter to Kyle. We felt that this voice would be domineering like the Employer's character and it would be another introduction to the Employer buy without showing his face, which would create an eerie atmosphere and evoke suspicion and interest from the audience.
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